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Critique Needed For A Romantic Suspense Manuscript

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I need a avid and experienced romance novel reader to critique the manuscript of my romantic suspense novel. The 250 page manuscript is an interesting highly emotional story of a young female model. I just completed the second draft and about to send it for final publication. Critics who will be reviewing the manuscript will be expected to write a two-three page document answering questions such as: Are my characters flat or round, likable, believable, clearly motivated, active in the plot line and not terminally stupid? Are my descriptions overwhelming or underdone?, my logistics more or less correct?, my timeline sensible? Are my expositions perfect or long info dumps or carefully scattered crumbs that leave too many questions hanging? Is my dialogue intriguing or tagging annoying or overly fancy? Have I just got way too many words? Do the plot twist draw readers into the story or throw them out? How about the pacing and flow of the story? Critic should feel free to praise and criticize where necessary. I take kindly to constructive criticism. Interested reviewers should attach sample of recently completed projects in the body of their email and also include the time frame needed to complete the project.
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Hello, I'd love to critique your manuscript for you! I'm an editor and author. I can absolutely provide you with a two or three page document answering the question you outlined in regards to your manuscript. I can also provide comments within the document to better identify sections where, for example, a line of dialogue doesn't really work for easier identification of the section. If you'd like, I could provide proofreading/editing as well, either now or at a future date. I've edited romance novels in the past as well as read my fair share. As an author I lean towards writing fantasy. I can have your manuscript back to you in less than a week. Don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions or if you would like any additional information. Warm Regards, Kathleen Price
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Experienced Native English writer, ready for help, I can show you my previous work samples. I'll professionally give 2-3 page critique based on the answers of your questions. I hope you will be fully satisfied with my services. Thanks
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I have five years of professional experience writing and editing. A good editor works closely with the writer to refine their work into the perfect piece of art. It's not just about convention and voice. It's also about challenging the writer to tap into their creativity and hone their skills. That is why feedback is so necessary to the process. I love that you really want to know how you are doing. That is the true sign of a good writer. I want to give this project the time that it deserves. At most, it will take me a week. I can definitely get it done a lot sooner of you'd like. I've attached the following sample of a story that I recently finished. My style varies depending upon the task at hand. Mountain High was blighted with an unholy infection of the petty masses. Their dyed hair and dark clothes screamed the attention seeking depression characteristic of adolescents. Amidst the waves of greed and lust, sat Josh. His ebony curls stuck tight to his head while shining in the afternoon sun. He sat in the school's courtyard with a pencil and sketchbook in his lap. Nothing else in his world existed except the shapely Adonis he was creating. The gladiator's rugged features shot out of the paper in perfect form. Josh gave life to his art and the escape it offered gave him a sort of refreshing bliss. The soft caress of the summer wind touched his hair sweetly while he drowned out the clamour around him. The woes of the mundane world faded away for a brief moment before he was shocked out of his reverie by the hateful screech of the period bell.
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