Glazing the project itself, I noticed typos, so I stopped by.
I proofread mostly, and I do enjoy reading, and write on occasion myself.
The uploaded chapter itself has a lot of pitfalls but in terms of choice of word, punctuation distribution and placement, along with lack of clarity on some lines , but I write and proofread, so I am highly aware that proofreading one's own work is almost impossible, one just always reads what is in their own head.
The first most prominent one, "stuck in work and " (stuck at work).
Good Luck with your novel.
From just this chapter it isn't really clear if the boy's a child of divorce, or born out of wedlock, so I can't decide on how to steer my emotions with just this excerpt.
Hope it gets published and that I get to read it, so won't ask for any spoilers XD